Hi Steve,
I'm writting to touch base on the position i interviewed for last week as I am very interested in working at SBS. If you need any more information on my part feel free to ask.
Thank you for your time,
David Muniak
"
The response
"Hi David,
Unfortunately we have filled the position. Thank you for coming in and interviewing with us.
-steve
"
Gotta love the quick response that have so little meaning. I wrote back thanking him for a quick response and asked for any suggestions on better presenting myself. Gah.